Like a Simile
by Aplabw
I am like a platypus,
Different parts sewn together.
I laugh like an asthmatic.
I’m as insecure as a groundhog,
Hiding in my hole underground.
I smile like Joker.
I’m as dependable as an echo.
I am like pancit,
A dish mixed with everything,
Good and bad together.
I’m as extroverted as an introvert.
I am like a stew,
Allowed to simmer and think,
Become better with time.
Just a little poem I wrote for my Creative Writing class. We had to write a poem using just similes. I decided to base the structure off of a ballade and mixing it up a little by adding a little more to it. Also it doesn’t rhyme. I kind of like this better than my Where I’m From poem. What do you guys think?
I don’t look at you like this at all! I look at you like a jewel, somewhat protruding from the rock, partly still embedded. Actually, we’re all like that: still trying to discover who God created us to be! You have a lot of good traits, Aplabw, so just keep being who you are and let God mold and shape you into the masterpiece He has designed you to be.
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Thank you very much! It’s just a poem that I wrote for school. But thank you for the kind words.
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Your descriptions are fun!
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